Monday, August 25, 2014

In the Dark Of Night









it makes no sense now
not to my mind nor my heart
how life comes and goes.


with but a whisper
a soft sigh deep in the night
what was is no more

hearts should be stronger
love should hold all of it tight
that we may hold on

6 comments:

  1. Sad haiku of lost love . Love comes and goes.

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  2. wow Melanie ! a sublime cascade of philosophical haikus ! the first verse is simply powerful !

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  3. Thank you both for reading my poetry.

    Melanie
    bd

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  4. Very nice. I could "sense" the sadness.

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  5. Those last three lines are so poignantly powerful...

    Sensing Wetness and Making Sense

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  6. Wow. What a deep, sad and right set of haiku. Thanks for sharing them here. I enjoyed these.

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