Monday, August 25, 2014

In the Dark Of Night









it makes no sense now
not to my mind nor my heart
how life comes and goes.


with but a whisper
a soft sigh deep in the night
what was is no more

hearts should be stronger
love should hold all of it tight
that we may hold on

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6 comments:

  1. rallentandaAugust 26, 2014 at 8:12 PM

    Sad haiku of lost love . Love comes and goes.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 27, 2014 at 11:44 AM

    wow Melanie ! a sublime cascade of philosophical haikus ! the first verse is simply powerful !

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  3. UnknownAugust 27, 2014 at 12:15 PM

    Thank you both for reading my poetry.

    Melanie
    bd

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  4. AnonymousAugust 27, 2014 at 3:51 PM

    Very nice. I could "sense" the sadness.

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  5. MarkAugust 30, 2014 at 6:23 AM

    Those last three lines are so poignantly powerful...

    Sensing Wetness and Making Sense

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  6. AnonymousAugust 30, 2014 at 1:26 PM

    Wow. What a deep, sad and right set of haiku. Thanks for sharing them here. I enjoyed these.

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